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Sewing supplies, yarn, colored pencils, sewing machines, threads, bobbins, needles
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Get everything you need to sew your next garment. Open Monday-Friday 8-5pm, located in the Fashion District.
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Local news in Whoville, delivered to your doorstep. Find out what happened today.
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Upsetting the small town of Whoville, a local elderly man steals everyone’s presents the night before an important event. Stay tuned for live updates on the matter.
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Eggs are a source of joy in everyone’s life. When I was a small child, I remember picking eggs from the hen house and bringing them to the kitchen. Those were the days.
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Learn how to cook eggs with this complete guide in 1 hour or less. We cover all the methods, including: over-easy, sunny side up, boiled, and poached.
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Mechanical pencil
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Self-sharpening mechanical pencil that autocorrects your penmanship. Includes 2B auto-replenishing lead. Available in both Vintage Pink and Schoolbus Yellow. Order 50+ pencils, get free shipping.